Fathers Day T shirt Design

Well more of a design for the whole family, I did this with notonthehighstreet in mind really as they are really into that whole custom thing. So I've done a thing with collective nouns where a custom family name is included too. A fantasy of unicorns, A love of Smiths...
Here's the basic template I'll take photos tomorrow, seem to have a camera phobia at the moment? not sure why, can't seem to get going bit swamped I think.
Ooo if spot any spelling mistakes Please let me know, its not my strong point.

I'm in two minds about LOve of smiths (or any family name) I had thought of brilliance of Smiths, still not 100% sure, should be a small L, may be a dazzle of (family name) and I'll find another for zebras?